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The Life of Magaki Uzumaki by ~kibaluverx22:iconkibaluverx22:



The Life of Magaki Uzumaki Chapter 1

~ 16 years ago

Kakashi was running to the most damaged part of town. The part where a showdown with the monstrous creature, The Nine Tailed Fox, and the brave Fourth Hokage had just finished.. The creature was now gone and The Fourth was slowly dieing with the most precious thing in his life in his arms clutched to his chest, his only son Naruto.

Kakashi had just arrived in the area and no one yet had gone through the cloud of smoke to find the Hokagae. Kakashi had brought something very important to show his sensei before he died. It was Kushina’s dying wish that Kakashi do this for her. “Please Kakashi…bring.... her to Minato. He has to know….” Those were the words that Kushina had used for her last breath.

Kakashi clutched the delicate package to his chest and covered it with part of the blanket that was already wrapped tightly around it. He took a deep breath and ran through the smoke. He had to get there quickly since ANBU would probably soon start to search for his sensai. Soon later he saw a body lying on the ground holding something in its arms. “Sensei!” yelled Kakashi.

He ran to his sensei’s body to see he was still breathing. Minato slowly opened his eyes to see Kakashi in front of him holding something in his arms. Minato then looked down to see the package in his own arms. He smiled. Naruto was unharmed, breathing and crying. He would live. He then looked up at Kakashi and smiled, “Kakashi what are you doing here?” he asked quietly. He was too weak to speak at all but he had to try. Kakashi felt a tear go down his face. His sensei was dying right in front of him and he could do nothing to stop it. He shook it away and said, “Sensei…I have to tell you something…Kushina… she… she passed away. She died giving birth to Naruto and…”

“Ahh.” said Minato. He knew that his loved one was dead already. He had felt it somehow. “There’s something else.” said Kakashi. Minato looked up at him with interest. “Sensei, Naruto isn’t your only child,” Kakashi lifted the blanket covering off the towel wrapped package to reveal a small baby who was silent. Somehow Kakashi pulled off a smile “You also have a daughter. Kushina had twins.”

“What?” Minato said surprised. He looked at the baby. She was much smaller then her brother and looked paler also. “She looks so weak. Is something wrong with her?!” asked Minato terrified for his child. Kakashi frowned behind his mask. “She is very sick. Even Tsunadae couldn’t figure out what was wrong. She said there was a possibility that she might,” Kakashi swallowed hard; “There’s a chance that she might die.”

Minato was sad and terrified for his child. “Take Naruto Kakashi, let me see my daughter.” he said weakly. Kakashi switched kids with Minato so that his sensei was holding his new daughter. He smiled down at her. She was so tiny. “You know Kakashi,” Minato said weakly, “Kushina was the one that chose the name for Naruto. I think I should name this little angel don’t you think?”

Kakashi couldn’t say anything because of the tears falling down from his eyes so he just nodded. “Let’s see...” said Minato. He then closed his eyes. “Sensei!?” yelled Kakashi.

Minato opened his eyes again and said, “Her name is Magaki. Magaki Uzamaki.” “It’s a beautiful name sensei.” said Kakashi. “Kakashi, please take my children to the hospital. They need to be taken care of, especially Magaki.” Minato started to lose the spark in his eyes as they narrowed down, “Take care of them when they get older to, watch out for them and make sure they don’t get into trouble.” “Sensei…” said Kakashi. He didn’t want him to die, not now. “Goodbye Kakashi. I know you’ll be an excellent ninja when you get older.” Minato closed his eyes and whispered; “Kushina, I’m ready…” he took his last breath and smiled. The Fourth Hokage was dead. “Goodbye sensei…” He took Magaki out of his sensai’s arms and now held both Kushina and Minato's children.

“Daddy Minato!!” yelled a small sad voice. Kakashi turned around to see a small child with light brown hair running towards him. “Rashaha?!” Exclaimed Kakashi. Rashaha was Kushina’s first child but Minato was not his father. Because of that, Rashaha always called him daddy Minato instead of daddy. Even though he wasn’t his father, Minato always treated him as a son when he got together with Kushina. Rashaha ran straight past Kakashi to Minato’ lifeless body. “Daddy Minato! Wake up!” the toddler cried. But Minato didn’t stir.
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Authors Note: Rashaha is 3 years old at the time.
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Kakashi sighed sadly. “Rashaha…” said Kakashi wearily “He’s not going to wake up. He's gone.” Rashaha looked up to him eyes widened. “No! He can’t be dead! He can’t…” He then started to sob. “First mommy, now daddy Minato?! No, this can’t happen!” Rashaha cried. Kakashi wanted to comfort him but he then felt a deadly presence. He then felt something hit him in the back of the head. Kakashi shut his eyes and dropped Minato’s kid on the floor as he fell unconscious. “Well what do we have here?” asked a sinister voice. Rashaha scrambled to his new siblings and covered them with his arms and said. “Who are you?”

“My name is Orochimaru.” said the voice. Rashaha felt an in impact on his neck that made him fall to the ground unconscious. Orochimaru laughed quietly. He lifted Rashaha off Naruto and Magaki and placed him on the ground next to them. “Well, well what do we have here? I thought Kushina was only having one child, but I guess I was wrong.” He looked at both the kids and then at Magaki only

. “I don’t think there will be a problem if I take you away. After all, we were all waiting on the Fourth Hokagae’s son, not daughter.” He scooped up Magaki in his arm and then looked at Rashaha, “And I need to take you to, just in case you go to The Third and tell him about my little kidnapping, but first.”  Orochimaru placed a hand on his head and made a sign with his other hand. “Memory Evaporation Jutsu!” he said.

In the middle of Rashaha’s forehead, a green like mist came out of it. He screamed in pain but he still laid unconscious. Orochimaru then picked him up and threw him over his shoulder. He then looked down at Naruto who was starting to cry. Orochimaru smiled evily, “Good luck in the world, Naruto. I hope one day you’ll die a slow painful death.” Orochmaru then heard voices saying “Find the Hokagae immediately! Look everywhere for him!” said a ninja’s voice.

”Well it’s time for me to exit.” said Orochimaru. And in a poof of smoke he was gone. Taking Rashaha and Magaki with him.
©2008-2009 ~kibaluverx22
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This is my new story The Life of Magaki Uzamaki. I hope you like it! Please comment. :D

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:icondjdanicalifornia:
wow thats so good!

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In a coloring book, the lines are there to guide you.
Like in life, there are lines that show you the way.
You follow those lines until you are ready to break free.
Until ready to color outside of the lines.
:iconkibaluverx22:
aww thank you! ur story is good to!!

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U can call me Kushina-chan!
If you think Naruto deserves a family, click here:[link]
I love to draw, i dislike people who hate Jacob Black and Kiba Inzuka.....
:icondjdanicalifornia:
awwe ty ^^

--
In a coloring book, the lines are there to guide you.
Like in life, there are lines that show you the way.
You follow those lines until you are ready to break free.
Until ready to color outside of the lines.
:iconkibaluverx22:
welcome!

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U can call me Kushina-chan!
If you think Naruto deserves a family, click here:[link]
I love to draw, i dislike people who hate Jacob Black and Kiba Inzuka.....
:iconmissmybcmiyuki:
wow this story is interesting! OwO i like it ^w^

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A child all alone, a shy Hyuuga comes to her aide. Can she do it on her own, or will a blonde boy offer his assistance? (My NaruHina Fanfic) > [link]
:iconkibaluverx22:
thanks! :D

--
U can call me Kushina-chan!
If you think Naruto deserves a family, click here:[link]
I love to draw, i dislike people who hate Jacob Black and Kiba Inzuka.....
:iconmissmybcmiyuki:
your welcome ^w^

--
A child all alone, a shy Hyuuga comes to her aide. Can she do it on her own, or will a blonde boy offer his assistance? (My NaruHina Fanfic) > [link]
:iconkibaluverx22:
:D

--
U can call me Kushina-chan!
If you think Naruto deserves a family, click here:[link]
I love to draw, i dislike people who hate Jacob Black and Kiba Inzuka.....
:iconokamiyoukai259:
oh wow that was so sad! I really did cry!
:iconkibaluverx22:
that a good thing? :XD: and i'm sorry ya cried! :D

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U can call me Kushina-chan!
If you think Naruto deserves a family, click here:[link]
I love to draw, i dislike people who hate Jacob Black and Kiba Inzuka.....

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